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[kbk]

Finally, the dark!fic is done.

Title: Hospitality
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Rating: R
Warnings: Abuse - physical and sexual. Killing. Brainwashing. General bastardry. Death. A little gore. A few bad words, but if you can't cope with that...

Further notes in the linked post.

As the divergences - a selection of alternate endings - are in the comments, I ask that if you choose to feedback (and please do) you do so in this post. Right here. 'k?

And now, I really need to sleep.

Comments

[canadian-snoopy.livejournal.com]

There's two versions to what I want to say. Long version: the twistiness of this was so *good*. And I loved the minimalistic style of prose that you used in the story -- it just *works* with this and I couldn't imagine that anything else would've worked nearly as well so congrats on the choice.

God, so many different paths and even though you've managed to work through most of the permutatios that *I* can think of, I loved that feeling of untapped possibility. I just get the feeling that there's so much *more* that could be written and it would all still be original and twisty and *good*.

Short version: OMGLOVE!

;o))))

[kbk]

Hee! Thank you so much.

The thing with the possibilities is, the more I wrote, the more I thought of, so I totally agree that there's more that could be told.

Thanks again.