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Nov. 14th, 2004 01:37 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
kbkI hate fleshing out dialogue. It's probably my least favourite part of fic. Because every other tag is "he said, ____ly," or "he looked ____" or... Meh.
Meh Meh Meh.
I have dialogue for the last scene. I just don't want to flesh it out. Though I just thought, it can be more Bobby-pov-ish, and... that might work. *blinks in a calculating fashion*
It's bloody TV, that's what it is. They're quite happy to sit and talk to each other, and I know how it would be acted out, I can hear the particular inflections that I want but I don't know how to convey that without the aforementioned tags which, frankly, get boring in short order.
And I think I will leave getting the kid drunk until tomorrow. Or possibly later. Because tomorrow I will work. Honest. And by tomorrow I mean after-next-sleep, i.e. Sunday. Because now I'm going to sleep. Yes.
Meh.
Meh Meh Meh.
I have dialogue for the last scene. I just don't want to flesh it out. Though I just thought, it can be more Bobby-pov-ish, and... that might work. *blinks in a calculating fashion*
It's bloody TV, that's what it is. They're quite happy to sit and talk to each other, and I know how it would be acted out, I can hear the particular inflections that I want but I don't know how to convey that without the aforementioned tags which, frankly, get boring in short order.
And I think I will leave getting the kid drunk until tomorrow. Or possibly later. Because tomorrow I will work. Honest. And by tomorrow I mean after-next-sleep, i.e. Sunday. Because now I'm going to sleep. Yes.
Meh.
