There's two versions to what I want to say. Long version: the twistiness of this was so *good*. And I loved the minimalistic style of prose that you used in the story -- it just *works* with this and I couldn't imagine that anything else would've worked nearly as well so congrats on the choice.
God, so many different paths and even though you've managed to work through most of the permutatios that *I* can think of, I loved that feeling of untapped possibility. I just get the feeling that there's so much *more* that could be written and it would all still be original and twisty and *good*.
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Date: 2005-07-18 08:09 am (UTC)God, so many different paths and even though you've managed to work through most of the permutatios that *I* can think of, I loved that feeling of untapped possibility. I just get the feeling that there's so much *more* that could be written and it would all still be original and twisty and *good*.
Short version: OMGLOVE!
;o))))