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Feb. 6th, 2006 08:34 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
So I've been reading Due South fic again - not that there's anything wrong with that, it's just something I do in phases - and somebody had an icon (damned if I can remember who or where) in which RayK looked very like Oz-off-of-BtVS. And there's the experimental hair, and the jewellery, and the instinct thing, and my version of Oz's internal monologue is not unlike my version of RayK's dialogue, and anyway it just seemed to fit. So this little scene popped up, and it goes a little something like this:
"I used to know a wolf. Uh, half-wolf. He liked donuts. You like donuts?"
Oz took a moment to just look at the detective. Frenetic, that's the word he wanted to use, and maybe... no, not intense, a synonym that fit better. Fervent, maybe. Frenetic, fervent and freakish. Oz let his smile creep out around the edges. "Yeah."
Kowalski grinned back at him, showing his teeth. "Donuts it is, then. C'mon, I'm buying."
But I'm having trouble working back from there, which is annoying. Maybe I'll just work forward and see what happens, and maybe once I have a bit more information I'll know how they met. Maybe.
"I used to know a wolf. Uh, half-wolf. He liked donuts. You like donuts?"
Oz took a moment to just look at the detective. Frenetic, that's the word he wanted to use, and maybe... no, not intense, a synonym that fit better. Fervent, maybe. Frenetic, fervent and freakish. Oz let his smile creep out around the edges. "Yeah."
Kowalski grinned back at him, showing his teeth. "Donuts it is, then. C'mon, I'm buying."
But I'm having trouble working back from there, which is annoying. Maybe I'll just work forward and see what happens, and maybe once I have a bit more information I'll know how they met. Maybe.
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Date: 2006-02-06 08:45 pm (UTC)Aww, *yeah*.
Please write this? I would kill to see these two together, you have no idea.
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Date: 2006-02-06 09:48 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2006-02-08 03:23 pm (UTC)Plot, schmot! What's a formulaic plot for DS? (Okay, so I'm not sure DS *has* formulaic plots, but it's been a while since I've properly watched the show.) Go with one of those and run with it.