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May. 22nd, 2003 07:39 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
kbkAte strawberries. Yum.
Am attempting to polish strawberry-related angst-fic, and it is eluding me. I think it's the tense. Most of it's in past, but it flicks from simple to whatever the other one is, and it just isn't quite right. And I don't know how to fix it. And I'm annoyed.
But, see, the first line and a half came on Tuesday, while eating strawberries. And then yesterday I worked out who it was - it isn't one of my usual characters, which is why I was confused - and wrote it. But it needs polished. Damn tenses.
Am attempting to polish strawberry-related angst-fic, and it is eluding me. I think it's the tense. Most of it's in past, but it flicks from simple to whatever the other one is, and it just isn't quite right. And I don't know how to fix it. And I'm annoyed.
But, see, the first line and a half came on Tuesday, while eating strawberries. And then yesterday I worked out who it was - it isn't one of my usual characters, which is why I was confused - and wrote it. But it needs polished. Damn tenses.
